Sunday, September 3, 2006

Mississauga Write-Off Day Three (afternoon)

Progress has been slow for me today -- stayed up too late last night, plus I'm at the difficult stage in which I'm defining characters' voices; once I have those down, my pace tends to pick up.

It's still overcast here, but it's not raining today. Hayden has gone for a walk, Herb is now working out on my balcony, and I've got the door from my office to the balcony open to let in fresh air.

Well, back to work!


At September 03, 2006 3:59 PM , Blogger E.Jim Shannon said...

You mention character voices. This has been something I've been struggling with but suddenly in reading your post the lights came on.

Also, I use to many "was". I think it's okay to use "Was in speach" because I think we all use it to some degree. But not in prose. I havn't come across one "was" in Mindscan.



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