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| Rate the Performance of the Instructor: | Outstanding | Very Good | Good | Adequate | Poor | Very Poor |
| Meeting the course objectives | 10 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Communicating enthusiasm | 12 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Demonstrating current and thorough knowledge of the subject |
13 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Demonstrating a positive, supportive attitude for learning |
11 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Being organized and prepared to teach each class | 10 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Communicating the course material clearly | 9 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Using interesting, relevant and appropriate
teaching methods |
11 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Responding to student questions and comments | 12 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Encouraging students to be involved in the class | 10 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Using scheduled class time fully and productively | 12 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Giving helpful feedback | 12 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| His or her performance overall | 12 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
“Thank you very much for being a part of Odyssey this year. Your lectures were fascinating to listen to: focused, energetic, and filled with insights. And the students really appreciated your feedback on their manuscripts and the individual attention and advice you gave them. Many commented how much they enjoyed the time you spent with them outside of class and how much they learned from you.“Your passion for teaching and your skill at teaching were very apparent. Thank you for all the time and energy you devoted to the class. It was a pleasure having you at Odyssey; thanks for helping to make the workshop a great success.”
Jeanne Cavelos
Director
Odyssey: The Fantasy Writing Workshop
“Many thanks for the wonderful workshop you conducted for Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. It was an ideal blend of topics on the craft of writing and the business of publishing from an insider who has succeeded in both.“From our speakers we seek information and inspiration, and you provided both with intelligence, passion and conviction. Thanks for making this event such a major success.”
Scott Brendel
Education Chair
Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers
“The effort and thought you put into the story critiques both in preparing for and conducting the workshop was remarkable. I speak for all ten participants when I say your comments were both insightful and helpful. As well, we all appreciated the professional approach you took to running the workshop, while, at the same time, sustaining a relaxed and enjoyable atmosphere. Many of the participants have expressed to me the sense of encouragement they felt at the end of the workshop. We would not hesitate to recommend you to others planning a writing workshop.” Hayden Trenholm
Workshop Coordinator
Imaginative Fiction Writers Association, Calgary, Alberta
[Note: IFWA has been holding annual workshops since 1996; in all that time, Robert J. Sawyer is the only person ever asked to return to facilitate a second workshop for them.]
“Thank you barely covers it. I will always remember you and this ‘watershed’ week in my life. See you on the Best Sellers List.”
“I deeply appreciate the care and attention you gave us. You are an inspiration for writers and your encouragement for our group should help produce some excellent new published authors.”
“Ultimately you have taught me that writing is a human process, that the magic is in the doing, and that I am capable. Thank you for the generosity of your advice and for your kindness and humanity. I owe you an inscription.”
“It’s been a pleasure and a privilege to work with you! I’ve been challenged, inspired and my writing has improved thanks to your generous teaching.”
Student Comments
Humber School for Writers 2002
Humber College, Toronto, Canada
“It was such a treat to meet you and work with you on the 2006 conference. I've been reading through the evaluation forms, and thought that you might like to hear some of the feedback from conference-goers:
- “The personal highlight of the conference for me was Robert J. Sawyer's keynote.”
- “The personal highlight for me were all of Robert Sawyer's presentations.”
- “Terrific keynote.” (This was mentioned several times.)
- “Robert Sawyer was excellent, inspirational.”
- “Highlight was Robert Sawyer's Science fiction workshop.”
- “Meeting Robert J. Sawyer.”
- “Robert Sawyer was by far the best!”
- “Highlight was talking to Robert Sawyer.”
- “Robert Sawyer is a good teacher as well as writer. His seminar stood out.”
- “Robert Sawyer no doubt at all, he's a star. I learned things about subjects I thought I knew all about.”
Lisa Mason
Coordinator
Surrey International Writers' Conference
Surrey, British Columbia
Robert Sawyer was helpful, encouraging, and gave direct insightful info on editing and getting published.
Yes very helpful comments. Good attention paid to specific things I did right and wrong in the ms.
Yes, it was very helpful. It opened my eyes to things I had not considered. Definitely. Mr. Sawyer was very nice and easy to talk to. He also provided some sample outlines and a list of markets. I am very happy that I was able to submit my work. Thank you very much for the opportunity.
It has been quite useful to me. Yes! Yes! I love the fact that anyone can get help from an author when needed.
Very much so. Specific feedback on story as an editor might see it. Encouragement. Industry tips.
Yes. I liked getting comments from a published author who understands the type of writing I’m attempting.
It was excellent. I found Mr. Sawyer’s comments regarding my manuscript. to be very helpful. I have no negative comments. I am very grateful for the experience.
Very helpful: Writer-in-residence well informed, helpful, encouraging, objective.
It was excellent.
Very much so. Robert Sawyer had a lot of very useful advice and information.
Very useful. It is useful for aspiring writers to gain direction in their writing.
Very good feedback, positive attitude from Rob, motivational. Thank you to Rob for scheduling Saturday workshops.
Very much excellent feedback Great constructive feedback thoughtful observations GREAT overall advice!
Yes. Good insight. No dislikes. One on one is very effective for the beginner; able to ask questions and get feedback.
Yes it was very informative and interesting. I found it very helpful.
Very. Definitely. I found Robert’s advice and encouragement very helpful.
Yes, very much so. Convenient scheduling, excellent commentary, very encouraging!
Very! Yes!
Extremely! Yes! I wouldn’t change a thing. Rob covers a lot of productive ground in an hour! Wow!
Yes. Thank you very much for making this program available going over my story with Robert Sawyer has clarified what I need to do next to develop as a writer.
Yes! Very useful. You should offer this more often. I liked the personal attention and clear exposition of what needs improvement in the manuscript.
Yes. Rob was very positive and encouraging.
Honest criticism from an author who I respect.
It was very useful. Definitely. I liked how there was a well established and well known writer who could answer all my questions in a fairly definite manner.
Extremely useful. Mr. Sawyer was very helpful. I liked the friendly atmosphere and excellent feedback from Mr. Sawyer.
Very much so. Absolutely. Friendly, nonconfrontational, good location and privacy.
Extremely professional advice warm person encouraging. Informal yet instructive. Robert Sawyer should be congratulated!
Yes, extremely. Mr. Sawyer gave me very useful advice and feedback. I liked the choice of writer prominent T.O. figure. I liked that Sawyer is a scifi writer.
Yes. Valuable feedback on the practical aspects of sf writing as a career, markets, how to approach writing a story, etc.
Yes extremely useful. Absolutely. I appreciate this programme and found Robert Sawyer’s feedback tremendously helpful and encouraging. Thank you!
Oh, yes. Yes.
Absolutely! Gave me an inside view by a published author which is very helpful to we who aspire to such a career. Absolutely! I’m disappointed that this program with an F&SF writer at the helm is not offered more often! The intervening decade and a half between Judith Merril and Rob Sawyer doing this program was far too long! We want more! [happy face]
Absolutely. The session with Rob was very helpful. Loved the critique session, it was outstanding.
Quite a bit. Yes. Good feedback about the story I had written and useful information about markets.
I was given excellent advice. I was nervous when I came in but Mr. Sawyer made me feel very comfortable.
This is the most useful idea for aspiring writers since the workshop. Absolutely.
Very good feedback, with insightful direct comments. Definitely. No faults at all.
Yes. Yes. Public lectures and the manuscript overview very useful.
Very much. Excellent feedback. Great constructive feedback. Insightful observations GREAT overall advice!
Robert J. Sawyer was the Edna Staebler Writer in Residence at the Kitchener (Ontario) Public Library in October and November 2006, hosting five public events (three seminars and two sets of readings), and meeting in hour-long one-on-one sessions with 37 aspirant writers. Thirty-five of those writers filled out anonymous evaluation forms. Everything they had to say is below (and you can download a PDF file containing a scan of all 35 actual evaluation forms here):
Rate your overall experience (where 1 is poor and 10 is excellent)
- Twenty-three ratings of “10”
- Nine ratings of “9”
- One of “7”
- One “11” from a particularly satisfied patron who added that number to the scale
- One left blank
for an average rating of 9.7 out of 10.
Was your consultation with Rob helpful?
Absolutely
Most helpful! He very generously answered my questions with information that will take me to a new level with my writing.
Absolutely! No holds barred critique. Rob saw many issues I wouldn’t have seen in revising/editing my own.
Yes / Very
All I had hoped for. Constructive, helpful and to the point.
Extremely. Identified weaknesses I had not contemplated in a tactful way.
Yes, he opened my eyes to what I need to do.
Extremely. I felt like I got some great feedback. It was appreciated that his comments were tendered with kindness and to the point. He was very thorough in his experience.
It was helpful on every point. Very clear, very thorough. Nothing left unturned. Rob explained everything I wanted to understand, and more. He spotted everything that needed improvement.
Absolutely
Very. He was very knowledgeable and had plenty of clear suggestions for improvement.
Very helpful. Rob is an excellent teacher who provided invaluable information and critique about my submitted work and the industry in general.
Very helpful. the explanations were very clear and thought provoking. I like Rob’s openness and willingness to answer any questions I had.
Extremely
Yes. To hear the comments from someone who knows was great. He was unbiased and honest.
Very much so
Yes!
Yes
Very!
Excellent & Beyond!
Very much so. In addition to critiquing my story, he helped provide me with a structured approach to furthering my writing career.
I think it was very helpful to talk to someone who knew the industry & how it worked. Also he had some interesting tips and ideas on how to edit your work yourself. The suggestions weren’t bad either.
Yes. His insights were excellent & his attention to detail was extremely helpful. I will be taking his comments to heart as I continue working on the novel.
He’s a very nice man. Absolutely. He offered constructive criticism, ideas and encouragement. I’ll go back to my writing with renewed vigour.
Yes. Good level of feedback (not too much in the details). Some good hints & tips.
Yes it was great to go over my writing with someone who really knew what they were talking about.
Very! I learned a lot in the time allotted. Lots of good, sound and applicable advice.
Extremely he offered concrete feedback & valid suggestions.
Yes. Lots of constructive criticism
Yes, very informative, relaxed. Rob was very open and willing to answer even personal questions.
Yes solid recommendations
Yes. Very motivating, prompting me to continue on with my work. Interesting to see an objective evaluation from an author of another genre.
Extraordinarily. His experience shines through every comment and editorial mark. Especially about Point of view.
Very helpful! His interest in my ideas, suggestions for improvement and comments about form/structure/voice motivated my thoughts for further writing.
I have never had so much thoughtful, detailed, positive feedback. He has no agenda but to improve you and your work. He has an amazing eye for both the micro- and the macroscopic aspects of your manuscript. From commas to concept, he had looked and thought about everything.
What did you like about the experience?Time to talk with a professional and get his views on the industry and my writing.
The expertise he shared / the encouragement he gave
Rob was very precise and accurate in his critique.
Encouragement / concise approach
The one on one contact / the ability to ask and receive answers from questions.
Thorough critique; suggestions for publication, tips on research
Gave me some direction. It was nice to talk to a published writer.
Timing. I had just finished writing my first novel. It was great in editing tips, sales tip from the seminars. I enjoyed the WHOLE experience. Thank you so much.
It gave me a focus I never had before. I saw the weaknesses in my manuscript with a lot of clarity because Rob is a very animated speaker, and that made everything he said leave a deeper impression.
Extremely detailed critique of my work and Rob’s extensive industry knowledge.
Rob explained problems in my story and offered ideas about how to change them way more constructive than just saying “this needs to be changed.”
Honest and direct.
I found the experience motivating and enlightening. I found new direction for my work. I have a greater understanding of ideas that need to be work on with my work.
Thorough, insightful, balanced, encouraging, realistic
The comfort level. Robert was very down to earth.
Very good useful feedback / with one on one time
Rob’s affable, positive approach & demeanour. Attention to detail, his interest & the opportunity to discuss detailed & specific concerns with a professional of his ability & calibre.
Rob & his wife Carolyn went over quite a few different ways of looking at the life of a poet. Ideas in my head I will now change concerning exactly what I was going to do with this. Thanks Rob & Carolyn.
He was very positive in his suggestions a lot of good ones. Made me see my story in a new light. I am very excited about going at it again.
His generous spirit. His vast knowledge & expertise. His clarity when expressing himself.
I very much enjoyed that Rob is a science fiction author. As he has experience writing in my genre. It was very informative and there were some excellent critiques.
I liked that he was positive & gave constructive criticism which would help you improve.
Rob’s enthusiasm and his focus on both the positive & what needs changing sent me away ready to dig into my manuscript & keep working.
The opportunity to have feedback from a professional writer, free of charge, in Kitchener.
Nice to have some feedback, to understand where I’m needing to improve and to get some information on how to proceed.
It was a good experience because it helped me figure out how to improve my writing.
Personable, kind, encouraging while still giving honest feedback. He pointed out technical advice that I know will be useful in future submissions. Very frank.
Inspirational offered suggestions re: rewriting.
Unique experience.
The critique was helpful, thorough, encouraging.
Concrete ways to improve the book
#1 conversation with an author I truly admire. #2 insight into the writing process
Meeting an author whose work I’ve enjoyed. Getting a non-partisan affirmation of my skill.
It was open, engaging, supportive and above all, encouraging. You included my wife as well! Thanks.
Straightforward advice delivered by a total professional. He was encouraging in a realistic fashion. Never pandered nor patronized. I left with much to think about, buoyed up and encouraged.
What should we change?It was great! Thank you very much.
Not a thing / Thanks!
No need to change any of it.
Don’t know. No basis for comparison.
I have no suggestions. What I experienced was complete.
Nothing
Nothing.
I really don’t know what would be a better choice. I felt the program went smoothly. Maybe an editing class would help? I was happy with my experience. Again my thanks!!!
Maybe a secondary stage of reviewing the revised manuscripts, to point out potential confusion in applying the advice. But this is a matter of time constraints, not anything that needs improving with the evaluation itself.
Nothing. Get him back again next year!
Great program! Thanks!
A longer residency perhaps? Was a great experience as is.
Nothing except maybe add 2 more workshops.
“It ain’t broke.”
Nothing.
More lectures!
Nothing that I’m aware of.
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Nothing.
It would be wonderful if students at the high school level could be made aware of Robert Sawyer’s talent ... possibly workshops at the schools?
Genre specific authors are very helpful to people writing in that genre. As much as I would love to see another sci-fi author next year, however, a different genre would be more appropriate for others.
Seems pretty good as is.
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Nothing, in my opinion.
No comment at this time.
I think that it was fine the way it was. [happy face]
Nothing! [happy face] I’m so grateful for the opportunity. Thanks for supporting K-W writers.
Continue offering this service much appreciated.
Nothing
Don’t see a need for any changes to be made.
nothing
Nothing. High marks all around.
Comfort level of meeting room.
[changed question to “What should I change?”] First of all, my self doubt about the effectiveness of my writing. With new confidence I shall move on with more writing and even directing my dramas.
Robert J. Sawyer should be at my side every day while I’m writing ... okay that’s a bit unrealistic. But after today, I feel he will be. Change nothing! I also want to thank Rob for scheduling a special appointment for me after a death in the family prevented me from attending my original appointment. What a Pro!!!
In addition to formal survey comments, Rob received five thank-you letters from KPL patrons:“I had the privilege of coming to hear you speak last week at KPL. Your points on point of view were precise and clear to understand. The audience participation part was extremely effective in emphasizing the point of view errors and applying corrections. The most pleasurable part was just listening to you speak. You have a fabulous voice and a personable way of communicating. The time just flew by. Thank you for offering your expertise. I look forward to implementing your suggestions in my own writing.”
“I just wanted to say thanks again for reviewing my manuscript. I was inspired by your advice I’m attempting to write a page a day. I’m a long-hand-first-draft kinda girl, so it feels good to putting pen to paper every morning. Thank you for all your honest, down-to-earth suggestions!”
“Robert & Carolyn, your love of reading, writing, selling and all things to do with books was generously and graciously shared with us here in Kitchener-Waterloo. Thank you both for being here. I learned a lot. Have a great day!”
“Thanks so much for your evaluation of my manuscript when you were at the KPL. I read your note of encouragement every time I sit down to write.”
“I want to thank you for the suggestions and kind comments you gave during my manuscript appraisal and for the generosity of advice you offered. You’ve truly given me new horizons in my writing.”
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Letter to Beginning Writers
Rob's "On Writing" advice columns
Manuscript-format checklist
Notes for the copyeditor
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