Mississauga Write-Off Day Three (afternoon)
Progress has been slow for me today -- stayed up too late last night, plus I'm at the difficult stage in which I'm defining characters' voices; once I have those down, my pace tends to pick up.
It's still overcast here, but it's not raining today. Hayden has gone for a walk, Herb is now working out on my balcony, and I've got the door from my office to the balcony open to let in fresh air.
Well, back to work!
1 Comments:
You mention character voices. This has been something I've been struggling with but suddenly in reading your post the lights came on.
Also, I use to many "was". I think it's okay to use "Was in speach" because I think we all use it to some degree. But not in prose. I havn't come across one "was" in Mindscan.
Thanks.
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